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BBL1986's avatar

The funny thing is that it's not possible to be sure whether there really are monsters in that world or Horace is delusional.

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a circus boy's avatar

A gamma point of view that's actually believable. Wow, I do not remember the last time I read a gamma viewpoint that resembled what would happen in real life.

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Jim Nealon's avatar

Getting Lovecraft vibes from his Gamma spiral. Suppose he is the monster in the mirror. Sanity check time?

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DLR's avatar

Unreliable narrators can be fun.

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Postcards From A Kitchen's avatar

Way to leave us hanging! I am enjoying this so much more than I thought I would (I haven’t read a lot of fantasy). Thank you for this very entertaining story.

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Kurio_Music's avatar

I'm starting to wonder if his employer is imaginary too, or at least not what they're purported to be.

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James Allin's avatar

Take the 5th. You're not going to

"explain" your way out of something

this serious.

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Olga's avatar

Is MCI in-house counselor his mommy? How pissed is she?

I now have so much anticipation for where this story is going.

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Olga's avatar

"I wasn't stalking her. I was protecting her."

Noooo! Agghh!

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Olga's avatar

Love the name MCI. It makes me think of that 1990s phone company that my parents used after moving to the US to call their relatively back in Europe, at $3+ per minute rates.

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Stg58AnimalMother's avatar

Dawson...teeth...doesn't Horace realize they are everywhere?

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JW's avatar

“I really should have kept my mouth shut, waited for the company lawyer. But dammit, my honor had been impugned! My competence had been questioned!”

He is the secret monster killing king, after all. Who are they to question him?

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Snowyteller's avatar

He is delusional, question is, how delusional?

Would be funny if the guy was a still a skinwalker.

A gamma would never be able to admit to being played.

This teller confesses though that he doesn't know just how much is and isn't delusion. There's still quite a bit of wriggle room. The dog's body wasn't found, of course a probable explanation is the 'cleanup crew' was just himself.

The company supposedly exists, but... A question of how much of the dialogue we get from other characters is even real?

One thing is however not remotely in doubt.

Horace is a massive gamma.

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Cedric's avatar

"A gamma would never be able to admit to being played."

Someone with comedic talent knows when to make a joke at their own expense. If you're crazy enough to be a joke, a comedian plays along with it. If you think I'm funny, stupid, something you laugh at, and I'm unable to look at it from another point of view, yours, then I'm dumber than if I could.

In the questioning, during 'Are you absolutely crazy?!', you prove yourself to be insane if you deny it. If you're hostile, argumentative, and offended during someone else's inquiry, you confirm it. People with status can survive being made fun of. They play the clown, when everything and everyone around them shows how you're a joke right now.

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Masked Menace's avatar

"He is delusional, question is, how delusional?"

Agreed, that is the question and that is what is driving the suspense. This is fast becoming a book club.

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Daniel D's avatar

A gamma could admit to getting played, he just wouldn't accept any responsibility for it. He'd work out a story where he was the victim and someone else was at fault for him getting played.

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Snowyteller's avatar

That's the second line of defense, 'if I was played, it was only because of X! In reality I am still the secret king!'

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BodrevBodrev's avatar

Yeah, this is getting into A Beautiful Mind territory.

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Forrest Bishop's avatar

There's a bit of contact between this story and one from the VDai sim a few days ago involving a "Professor Alistair Graves—balding, nicotine-stained, and perpetually haunted by..." The sim story wasn't edited, though I made up the title based on its output. https://forrestbishop.substack.com/p/tem-waves-the-library-of-forgotten

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John's avatar

I look forward to reading this every week

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BodrevBodrev's avatar

It started out funny, but now I'm getting concerned. Just like a real life gamma encounter.

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